#1
A metal/melodic metal song I made. lyrics for it too.

Escape from Ashes


e-8---------7-------|-8----------10-----|-8-7--7--7-8-7-|
B---10---10---9---9-|---10----10--------|---------------|
G------9--------8---|------10-----------|---------------|
D-------------------|-------------------|---------------|
A-------------------|-------------------|---------------|
D-------------------|-------------------|---------------|
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e-------------------|-------------------|--------------|
B-------------------|-------------------|--------------|
G-2*----------------|-2*--------7-------|-5*-2*-2*-2-2-|
D-2*--------2*------|-2*--------7-------|-5*-2*-2*-2-2-|
A-0*--------2*------|-0*--------5-------|-3*-0*-0*-0-0-|
D-----------2*------|-------------------|--------------|
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e-5----5---5-----|-3----3---3-----|-1----1---1-----|-------------------|---|
B----5---5---5---|----3---3---3---|----1---1---1---|-1-3-1-0--0--0-1-0-|---|
G--------------5-|--------------4-|--------------2-|-------------------|-2-|
D----------------|----------------|----------------|-------------------|---|
A----------------|----------------|----------------|-------------------|---|
D----------------|----------------|----------------|-------------------|---|
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e-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|
B-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|
G-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|
D-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-|-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-|-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-|-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-|
A-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-|-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-|-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-|-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-|
D-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-|-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-|-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-|-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-|


Verse:
e-----------------|------------------|-----------------|-----------------|
B-----------------|------------------|-----------------|-----------------|
G-2---------------|:-----------------|-----------------|-5---------------|
D-2---------------|:-7---------------|-3---------------|-5---------------|
A-0---------------|--7---------------|-3---------------|-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-|
D-----------------|--7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-|-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-|-----------------|

------------------|
------------------|
-----------------:|
-5---------------:|
-5----------------|
-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5--|


Chorus:

e-------------------|-----------------|-----------------|
B-------------------|-----------------|-----------------|
G-9-9-9-9-10-10-9-9-|-5-------5-------|-5-------5-------|
D-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3-------3-------|-3-------3-------|
A-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3-------3-------|-3-------3-------|
D-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3-------3-------|-3-------3-------|

e-------------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|
B-------------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|
G-9-9-9-9-10-10-9-9-|-5---5---9-------|-9---9---9-------|-9---------------|-----------------|
D-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3---3---7-------|-7---7---7-------|-7---------------|-----------------|
A-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3---3---7-------|-7---7---7-------|-7---------------|pick-scrape------|
D-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3---3---7-------|-7---7---7-------|-7---------------|/////////////////|


Verse:
e-----------------|------------------|-----------------|-----------------|
B-----------------|------------------|-----------------|-----------------|
G-2---------------|:-----------------|-----------------|-5---------------|
D-2---------------|:-7---------------|-3---------------|-5---------------|
A-0---------------|--7---------------|-3---------------|-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-|
D-----------------|--7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-|-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-|-----------------|

------------------|
------------------|
-----------------:|
-5---------------:|
-5----------------|
-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5--|


Chorus:

e-------------------|-----------------|-----------------|
B-------------------|-----------------|-----------------|
G-9-9-9-9-10-10-9-9-|-5-------5-------|-5-------5-------|
D-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3-------3-------|-3-------3-------|
A-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3-------3-------|-3-------3-------|
D-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3-------3-------|-3-------3-------|

e-------------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|
B-------------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|
G-9-9-9-9-10-10-9-9-|-5---5---9-------|-9---9---9-------|-9---------------|-----------------|
D-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3---3---7-------|-7---7---7-------|-7---------------|-----------------|
A-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3---3---7-------|-7---7---7-------|-7---------------|pick-scrape------|
D-7-7-7-7-7--7--7-7-|-3---3---7-------|-7---7---7-------|-7---------------|/////////////////|

Haven't done the bridge yet. Tell me what you think.
#3
Um, if either of those we're available for Mac, I'd do it. But for now this what it is, please review it.
#4
Okay, first, Fallenblood, you don't have to be rude to him.

Anyways...Intro sounds good. Is it clean or distortion? I assummed clean. The verse sounds good. The chorus is good, but I don't know how to play it, like timing, But it sounds good, so far anyways. And you don't really need drop D tuning for this. I played it in standard fine. But it doesnt make a difference.

7/10

Crit mine?