#1
I wrote and recorded this while quick while I was on vacation. Thought it had a nice little vibe to it. I got kinda bored at the end and wanted to finish it, which you might be able to tell. Tell me what you think, and what I could of done better maybe, anything helps

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Last edited by MK_Man at Feb 2, 2007,
#2
i think the songs very melodic and sort of peaceful in a strange way and is very good. i personally think it gets better in the second half. the top guitar part is very good and it gets almost flamenco at times with the chords. nice song.
#3
Ah, it sounds very nice and I too believe that peaceful is a fine word for it. The lead part 1.36-1.48 sounds dissonant for some reason. I like your guitar tone! Could you tell me your set-up? I'm sorry, there's not much more I can say about this. It's just nice

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#4
I use a mexican strat hooked up to my m-audio black box and I mix with ableton live. If i remember correctly i used the jazz amp simulation with a little chorus and a litle delay at the beginning, i thought it was kinda neat sounding. Upon relistening to it, the lead tone doesnt really fit right b4 the funky stuff I suppose. I think alot of that is from the way I mixed it too, its too loud over the other parts. Thank You!!!
#7
wow.....WOW ****** amazing . was nice to listen to calming and peaceful. and now i cant get it outta my head (In a good way) the song was just amazing .keep it up. u got reall talent.


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#8
Very good job!! It had a good flow to it and I stuck with it 'till the end, which I rarely do with sound bytes like this. You're on your way......