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This is A revised verious of one i posted earlier tell me what ya think (Crit for crit)

Hell and High Waters
By Paul Savage

Verse 1
You think this war is turning the tide?
Can’t you just let go of your pride?
There is no dragon in the cave,
Since I know this is all you crave

Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Verse 2
There bodies pile, mass graves
All died, in your name,
You say you do it to stop all wars,
Isn’t it ironic that you cause some more?

Verse 3
Always blaming other people,
Never looking at your self,
All your excuses are getting feeble,
War isn’t an excuse to increase your wealth,

Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,


Interlude
Your search for black gold,
Is going cold,
Never thinking weather is right,
Never considering your own might,
Sat in your suit,
Leading people with your flute,
Claiming that you’re setting them loose,
They don’t realise that,
Your just tying there noose,

*Solo*

Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Verse 4
You have proved it once more,
All you know is war,
Judging from your actions,
Leading to there reactions,

Verse 5
Didn’t you find what you were looking for?
Was it a needless war?
Still looking for excuses to stay?
Can’t you just leave them
There own way?


Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Verse 6
Do think its right?
Sending the young to fight?
Judging from there final cries,
Believing all your lies,

*back to military drum beat but a lot quicker than before*

We were played by our politicians,
With false accusations,
Never letting our voices be heard,
Always treating us like sleep herd,
If we truly want to rock,
We must ascend from the flock,
And give it all back,
Take back the pain,
The Suffering, The fear,
Give it all to the cause,
The cause of the war *Scream War*

*Another Solo*

Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,