#1
This is the latest version of this song crit for crit guys thx in advance any suggestions are welcome


Verse 1

I'll slow down the next time
im running away
You can hear me explain
all the feelings within
At the edges I started to fray
It never should have ended that way

Chorus

So look before you jump
Take your time with everything
it always works out in the end
You'll find your way...
Take your time now friend
you got nothing to be scared of
i'll be waiting at the end
Waiting for you
(Waiting for you)nice chorus, its great

Verse 2

How i wish i could change
what we've been through
all the sleepless nights
thinking about you
Things get better they always will
You just gotta fight each day
and let the world hear
what you have to say

Chorus

So look before you jump
Take your time with everything
it always works out in the end
You'll find your way...
Take your time now friend
you got nothing to be scared of
i'll be waiting at the end
Waiting for you
(Waiting for you)

Bridge

You know I'll be there for you
to help with anything
I'll see you through
Repair your broken wings
So take your time
If you need any help at all
just give me a sign

Chorus

So look before you jump
Take your time with everything
it always works out in the end
You'll find your way...
Take your time now friend
you got nothing to be scared of
i'll be waiting at the end
Waiting for you
(Waiting for you)
#3
eh not that great. i would consider adding more to your first verse because it's so short compared to all the other ones. your chorus is repeated too many times i think, it gets repetitive and that just gets annoying. you should also probably add one (at least) more verse. other than that i dont know what to tell you