#1
Well had to throw out old singer....and got new 1....and after recording this song for the third time.....we got the guitar and vocals how we want....next week we'll get bass and all that.....anywayz here it is.....www.myspace.com/xstillunknownx

Let me know what u really think.....if it sux tell me...if its amazing tell me...just an honest opinion....


BETTER DAYS

verse1:

it doesnt seem so far away
when i wasnt afraid to laugh and play
on a swing set in the fall,
i never knew i'd miss it all
the smile upon your broken face
open hearts in a better place
not knowing the end was near
never a need for any fear.


chorus:
Bring me back to the better days
give me a chance i'll show the way (2x)
escaping all--> our fears


verse2:

when you left there was a fight
i watched your truck go out of sight
and grew up wondering in pain
curious if i was really sane
the lies she told me were very cold
But i didnt know it till i was told
for all of this forsaken life
i'm sorry that bitch had to be your wife

Chorus:

Bring me back to the better days
give me a chance i'll show the way (2x)
escaping all--> our fears


Outro:

I knew this wasnt right,
i told you this could never be
i'm lying here now
wishing i could've seen
through all the lies
through all my fear
through all the hard days
without you being here
through all the fights
through all the tears
given from me to you
I owe you for all those years


Chorus:

Bring me back to the better days
give me a chance i'll show the way (2x)
escaping all--> our fears
#2
nice job. nice relaxing ballad type thing, could be better with some nice soft drums and bass.
singer sounds a bit whiny occasionaly, other than that he did a good job
ooh, keyboard just came in, that's nice lol

8.5/10 Excellent

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Smexy. =]
#4
Just finished listening to it, for the type of music you're going it sounded pretty good. I'm not really into that kind of music, but everything seemed to be fine. It is a good relaxed song and such, but maybe you could add in maybe fills or something of the sort to make it more interesting, it seems to sort of be the same thing. I don't know, maybe when there are drums and base in there, then it might sound more interesting. For what it is now though, it does sound pretty good.