#1
Ok I've been writing for a while and to the people that knew me and stuff I guess my lyrics have been allrite but apparently their not that great. It's kool tho cuz I'm not gonna take it personal or anything. This is just kind of a hobby for me. But I want to write my my girlfriend a song for Valentines day and I need your guys help. Here's what I've got so far.


You light up my life
You light up my soul
You make me believe
Like I have some control

You're my single star
My diamond in the sky
I want you near or far
So I can look you in the eye

I'll do it all for you!
Anything you want me to I'll do
Anything you need me for I'll be there
Anything to make it true I'll do
Cuz pain thats in your eyes I just can't bear

When stars are in your eyes, my world's great
But when you're down, my life just disipates
I want you happy every single day
For you to feel great in every single way
Want you to know my love will never change

I'll do it all for you!
Anything you want me to I'll do
Anything you need me for I'll be there
Anything to make it true I'll do
Cuz pain thats in your eyes I just can't bear

Ok thats it. I want it to be perfect so can I get some help? Maybe some ideas?
#2
y wud u spell guys with a Z?
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#3
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