#1
I've literally just written this song in about 5minutes, so it's not gonna be amazing...I've also posted a really rough clip of what it sounds like if anyone's interested- it's just me and guitar in altered tuning (recorded on the crappy PC mic) Please crit.

'Million Miles Away'

Catch me I’m falling still
Opening old wounds that won’t heal
‘Cause you open me, yeah you open me up
Like a thousand paper cuts

But hold on
Let’s try to carry on
Because the sun shines for us
It’s just a million miles away
And we’ll make it back some day

I sit all alone in my room
The light floods in, all I think of is you
And how you open me, yeah you open me up
Like no-one else could

So hold on
Let’s try to carry on
Because the sun shines for us
It’s just a million miles away
And we’ll make it back some day


here's the link...should be easy enough to download/open up again, sorry about the poor quality.

http://download.yousendit.com/8F140869494AE75B
#2
brilliant compared to most on here, its nice and not too lovey dovey. 5/5(bad quality though )
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#3
I liked it. Very good peice. The only line I didn't like is "I sit all alone in my room", I thought it sounded sort of cliched, but it isn't too bad, it wouldn't matter that much if you keep it.

Good work!
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