That's some pretty good playing, but it just doesn't sound right. But hey, its your version.
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You made a pretty big mistake at the end, but other than that, it was all right.

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Quote by lil-matee
what is a solo?
Nice, but you have to work on your timing. And that little screwup in the end wasn't a huge deal, just take it slow and you'll soon be able to play it without a single misstake...probably
Man, I always love the stuff that you do! I thought that was pretty cool!

I also watched your other videos - the Pinch Harmonics tutorial is good!

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