#1
The fragility of a bayonet;
the sadness of a single tear.
Immensity in a lone atom.

O sweat of sugary composition
make my medals gleam
in the soft, pallid caress

of the Moon.
#2
the first verse, i like the first verse, except sounds liek you should have a 4th line to it, to tie the other 3 together.the 2nd verse doesnt seem to work well with the first verse."o sweat of sugary composition"?? i dont see how that ties in with the first verse. first verse was good, second verse wasnt so good.