#1
hey all. check out my band's song called "Paper Planes". we have lyrics, but no mic stand for when we did this one take recording, so please excuse their absence.
thanks.

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I liked it.
Is it about fucking?
#2
very bluesy i like it. MAybe try and have the drums kick in a bit earlier, get the listener to keep the listening. Once u have vocals ull be set Could u crit mine? (In the sig)