#1
This song isn't really a "serious" song, I was just practicing with build ups and trying out some delay techniques and stuff. The intro takes a while haha but whatever i love a good buildup.
Attachments:
Song 15.zip
#2
I liked it. It had a good build up, which was the point I think you were trying to make. my favorite was the begginning with the piano. It reminded me of a Borknagar song. My only complaint is that it kind of drug on but it may just be the the mood I'm in. Overall 9/10. Crit for Crit? Mine is in my sig.
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#3
Thank you for writing this its quite amazing. alot of people at ug get mad at me when i say people overthink and force epics they try to write because they dont understand where i am coming from but this is one of the few epics that just works. Its not overthought and in never sounds forced and i love a good epic like that

Amazing 10/10
#4
The synths worked really well, and im pretty sure the twin solo is the best solo ive heard on the forums! I have nothing to add, except it could do with some more palm mutes here and there.
#6
It's perfect, 10/10, one of the best songs I've ever heard in UG.
Crit mine? check my sig.
#7
well that was just great.. very well done! I think I'd only change one thing throughout ... and it's a very minor change but it just sticks out like a sore thumb for me!

Change the bridge riff harmony - don't harmonise up a minor 3rd, try down a minor third instead.... it's a bit darker and fits in much better! Other than that though, this is very very cool work!!

Could you take a listen to my songs?
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=516564
#9
Dude that was blowing my mind...6000023040/10.
Dude, a band you should check out is defiantly Nightrage and Threat Signal.
They'll prolly inspire you to write more of this!
#10
Haha wow, didn't expect so much positive posts for a practice song. But I'm going to try and make the intro just a bit shorter, but keep it building up.
It took me about 2 days...well a total of around 8 hours. But thanks guys
And I'll be sure to check out those bands Valo
#11
Hey my friend! I'm the guy that asked you by PM for your "metalcore song"! You know that was serious :O my and my band just played it , with the keys and all... What you write is mother****in' amazing!

And I saw that thread with your name on it so I came and one more time that song pwned! You're by far the greatest epic songwriter I ever ****in' saw!....

10.5 out of 10....

PM me I'll show you the lyrics I put on your old song for my band :P