Ive been playing around with this concept for ever now and i finnaly decided to pick a version and stay with it. Its only about a quarter of a song its not done but you can get a good idea of the idea. The drums are crazy i know but im no drummer

Maiden Style Song.zip
i reckon it was pretty good, even though im not into that type of stuff really. maybe add a few harmonies in there and it will sound awesome
i would rethink some of the riffs, I think they are a bit too bland ... needs something to spice them up to make this stick out.. otherwise it's not got alot going for it...

I would definately get harmonising in there... it can't be maiden style without it - but play with different harmony ideas

Overall not bad but definately needs work and a splash of originallity!

Would you have a listen to mine?