#1
Jesus of Nazareth
Grinding your brains
Brainwashed insane
His agenda is illusion
Raping confusion
Vomit on the line of reason

What is this
Evil myth
Sent by nobody to **** up the population
One day he'll kill everybody
It'll be OK because then he wont exist
#3
Too short, and the second stanza blows.

The first bit, though... it has a lot of promise. Blasphemous, but it has potential.

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#5
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Jesus of Nazareth
Grinding your brains
Brainwashed insane
His agenda is illusion
Raping confusion
Vomit on the line of reason

What is this
Evil myth
Sent by nobody to **** up the population
One day he'll kill everybody
It'll be OK because then he wont exist


even though it does sound a little bit like a serial killer's final words. It's not that bad. The lyrcis are a bit mental, the first one flows much better than the second.
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#6
Yeah I thought the 2nd bit sucked and I'm gonna ditch it and probably get rid of the 1st line because it sounds gay. Ta