The song arrangement and chord progression is excellent...very haunting and interesting. The vocals are good but being doubled gives it a kind of muddy sound. If you can do harmonies, that would make it sensational...one I'd consider listening to over and over.
Yeah the doubled vocals was an experiment, i was going for a muddy sound but i think i might have overdone it because the melody is a little bit simple and the songs a little bit low. see it worked for losing inspiration-the top one but that has a much softer vocal melody.
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