#1
Verse 1:

What Does She See
In Her Reflection?
Painful Memories
And Confusing Questions?
Dreams Wanted..
But Just Won't Last
Regretful Of One Summer's Past..

Chorus:

She's Falling... Falling Away From Us..
She's Calling.. Calling Our Names For Trust..
She's Screaming.. Screaming "Help Me Now"
She's Crying.. Crying To Get Out
She's Hoping.. Hoping That It Will Hide
She's Dying.. Dying Inside

Verse 2:

I Know What She Sees..
But That Isn't Real
Not Really Sure How To Feel..
Wipe Away Her Tears..
Or Live With The Fear..
She May Do Something More..
More Than I Can Take

Chorus:

She's Falling... Falling Away From Us..
She's Calling.. Calling Our Names For Trust..
She's Screaming.. Screaming "Help Me Now"
She's Crying.. Crying To Get Out
She's Hoping.. Hoping That It Will Hide
She's Dying.. Dying Inside

Verse 3:

I Knew What She Saw..
The Reason Love Disappeared..
Why Nobody Could Get Near
Except For Me, I Let It Go
And For It, I Have Nothing To Show
Except For The Guilt Eating Me Alive
I Knew She Was Dying Inside


Falling... Falling.. (Away From Us)
Calling... Calling.. (For Trust)
Screaming.. Screaming.. (Help Me Now)
Crying... Crying.. (To Get Out)
Hoping... Hoping.. (It Will Hide)
Dying... Dying (Inside)

Chorus:

She's Falling... Falling Away From Us..
She's Calling.. Calling Our Names For Trust..
She's Screaming.. Screaming "Help Me Now"
She's Crying.. Crying To Get Out
She's Hoping.. Hoping That It Will Hide
She's Dying.. Dying Inside
#2
Verse 1:

What Does She See
In Her Reflection?
Painful Memories
And Confusing Questions?
Dreams Wanted..
But Just Won't Last
Regretful Of One Summer's Past..
reminds me of that book ' i know wat u did last summer'
Chorus:

She's Falling... Falling Away From Us..
She's Calling.. Calling Our Names For Trust..
She's Screaming.. Screaming "Help Me Now"
She's Crying.. Crying To Get Out
She's Hoping.. Hoping That It Will Hide
She's Dying.. Dying Inside
nice chorus, i would have the first part of the lines sung by back up singers
Verse 2:

I Know What She Sees..
But That Isn't Real
Not Really Sure How To Feel..
Wipe Away Her Tears..
Or Live With The Fear..
She May Do Something More..
More Than I Can Take
i dont like the repeating 'more'
Chorus:

She's Falling... Falling Away From Us..
She's Calling.. Calling Our Names For Trust..
She's Screaming.. Screaming "Help Me Now"
She's Crying.. Crying To Get Out
She's Hoping.. Hoping That It Will Hide
She's Dying.. Dying Inside

Verse 3:

I Knew What She Saw..
The Reason Love Disappeared..
Why Nobody Could Get Near
Except For Me, I Let It Go
And For It, I Have Nothing To Show
Except For The Guilt Eating Me Alive
I Knew She Was Dying Inside


Falling... Falling.. (Away From Us)
Calling... Calling.. (For Trust)
Screaming.. Screaming.. (Help Me Now)
Crying... Crying.. (To Get Out)
Hoping... Hoping.. (It Will Hide)
Dying... Dying (Inside)
ooo nice part, id still ahve the chorus how i said
Chorus:

She's Falling... Falling Away From Us..
She's Calling.. Calling Our Names For Trust..
She's Screaming.. Screaming "Help Me Now"
She's Crying.. Crying To Get Out
She's Hoping.. Hoping That It Will Hide
She's Dying.. Dying Inside


i like it very much, at first i couldnt tell wat exactly it was about, then as i read more i got it. very nice, i love the chorus, u could try it how i said, or keep it the same, doesnt matter.
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