#1
I haven't posted in awhile, and i was writing a song for my girlfriend for valentines day which is also her birthday...and i came up with this song...any crits are very appreciated...and i know its prolly a bit cliche...i know...give me some constructive critz...anything will be appreciated...thanks...

Different From The Rest

If i only gave you one night
To tell you what i think
One thing to make us right
I'd sing it in this song
So take a chance on me
I could be the best idea yet
I'll give you the best you
Could ever ask for
Cause you and me are
Worth forever tonight

Dreaming of the perfect
Person doesn't even come
Close to what i have in you
So mark this the start of a new
Cause for the first time
I'm not scared at all
So place your fingertips
In between mine
Cause we're different
From the rest of them

This is my heart on paper
From me to you
Cause i fell so carelessly
In those brown eyes
So place your fingetips
In between mine
Cause we're different
From the rest of them
#2
Alright, so i made it longer, and yea it is alittle cliche'
but i actually love this alot! i made it into more of a "song" so let me know what you think....

If i only had one night
To tell you what i think
One thing to make us right
I'd sing it in this song
So take a chance with me
I could be the best yet
I'll give you the best
You could ever ask for
Me and you are
Worth forever tonight

Dreaming of the perfect person
doesn't even come close
to what i have in you
So mark this the start of a new
Cause for the first time
I'm not scared at all
So place your fingertips
In between mine
Cause we're different
From the rest of them

This is my heart on paper
From me to you
Cause i fell so carelessly
Into those brown eyes
I'll give you the best
You could ever ask for
Me and you are
Worth forever tonight

Dreaming of the perfect person
doesn't even come close
to what i have in you
So mark this the start of a new
Cause for the first time
I'm not scared at all
So place your fingertips
In between mine
Cause we're different
From the rest of them

If i only had one night
To tell you what i think
One thing to make us right
I'd sing it in this song
So place your fingertips
In between mine
Cause we're different
From the rest of them