Somewhat inspired by the absolute epic that is Suite Sister Mary. Starts off in a similar fashion, then takes off. Could probably use some drums etc, but ... anyway, hope you can find something you like.

More than happy to crit your work in return.
i liked it very melodic. almost had me swaying my head :P. only things wrong with it are, maybe the slow intro and some of the riffs get a lil bit repetative...maybe lacks a powerful solo also? im not sure. it sounded great though, good job. 8/10
Overall it was a good song the intro needed some work though. without any other instrument behind the acoustic it sounded really long a drug out. I would suggest giving it a string section to come in and make it more intresting.

Otherwise its a very well writen song that seemed to capture what i think you were going for. A clean rock song with intresting parts.

Well done. 8.5/10
Yeah, the intro is a bit empty at the moment, i do need to add something there. The song was written with vocals in mind, so i think thats why the riffs seem to get a bit repetative. Ill try and write a "powerful solo" for you :P.