#1
Melted like plastic,
Shattered like glass,
Transparent lies,
Die way too fast… For you

The light shines
Through you,
The shadows
Tell me,
I’ve got to
Let go,
Can’t say I’m
Sorry… I’m not sorry

Light shone through your face and
Showed me everything, like
Clear cut images of
Double crossing, you
Undistorted liar ,
One more fake for hire
This transparency,
Lets me see… that I

Should’ve let go, should’ve let go
But I didn’t know
I would’ve let go, would’ve let go
You were to blame
I want to let go, want to let go
This is insane
I’ve got to let go of you
Because you’re not the same

I felt you
Cut me,
Like broken
Windows,
I heard you
Lying,
Deceiving
Crescendos

Saw through your lies
All of your lies
Shattered your lies
Transparent lies
Last edited by BillyGates at Feb 5, 2007,
#3
Melted like plastic,
Shattered like glass,
Transparent lies,
Die way too fast… For you
i like that verse alot

The light shines
Through you,
The shadows
Tell me,
I’ve got to
Let go,
Can’t say I’m
Sorry… I’m not sorry
now i dont like this verse as much

Light shone through your face and
Showed me everything, like
Clear cut images of
Double crossing, you
Undistorted liar ,
One more fake for hire
This transparency,
Lets me see… that I
eh, this verse isnt as good as ur first

Should’ve let go, should’ve let go
But I didn’t know
I would’ve let go, would’ve let go
You were to blame
I want to let go, want to let go
This is insane
I’ve got to let go of you
Because you’re not the same
pretty good, but has simple rhyming, kinda got annoying

I felt you
Cut me,
Like broken
Windows,
I heard you
Lying,
Deceiving
Crescendos
this is good also
Saw through your lies
All of your lies
Shattered your lies
Transparent lies
ok, nice finish verse, i like that.


ok, by far ut best verse was ur first one. the other ones i didnt like as much, but they wernt bad.and ur last verse finished it off nicly and smoothly.nice.

crit my newest if ya could