#1
I did this for some assignment on Guitartricks.com or something, I was bored and I hate that site cuz there's nothing to do unless you wanna shell out 50 bucks, but whatever...It's a little sloppy in the intro, but it cleans up...

It's called February Solo Assignment(or something along those lines), please crit it;

http://mkylman.dmusic.com

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Michael
#2
You should learn some scales and how to use them better. Not bad. Work on it. I would really like to make something up to that. Is it like a contest or something?
#3
Yea the pentatonics dont exactly work with that progression or at least in the key/way your playing.......although some of it is quite good it could use a bit of improvment................any way some interesting scales would spice that up quite a bit............luck to you............Check out this tune im working on, let me know what u think............https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=518272
#5
i liked it a few mistakes but still good keep it up


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