#1
Me and my buddy put this together on our acoustics the other night ... with the help of a 12 pack or so lol, anyways let me know what you think i'll crit some as well

"She wants"

Its just the little things of love
I could give them away
but now that they're gone
it ain't so easy to say

When i woke up
the look in your eyes
used to burn through my soul
now its sayin' goodbye (because)

there's no more.. love songs to die for
no more, love songs to die for..
no more love to give

When push turns to shove
i've come to the fray
i'd do anything for love
thats how i am betrayed

i can't give up
i've cried and i've tried
been left all alone
with my fear and my pride (and there's)

no more.. love songs to die for
no more, love songs to die for..
no more love to give

She wants, everything i ain't got
and she needs everything that i am not

ChorusX1... or 2? ha


-- thanks guys thats the just of it--
bu§ta
#4
its got a great flow


When i woke up
the look in your eyes
used to burn through my soul
now its sayin' goodbye (because) goodbye doesnt adds up here try changing that

there's no more.. love songs to die for
no more, love songs to die for..
no more love to give

chorus is ok but may be you can expand it and yeah overall its catchy but sort of a cliche i must say
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