Poll: green or blue
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View poll results: green or blue
Green
9 53%
Blue
8 47%
Voters: 17.
#1
Very sorry about the confusion. I'm not good with technology and settings... :/

It was 4-2 before, whether that should be factored or not due to the odd circumstances? I haven't the slightest clue.

When Did My Writing Become So Impersonal?

we travel like pac-man
on straight and narrow roads
under white clouds sheltered
by parhelion montage illusion
and i used to be so sure, i think
(before the skylight stained itself)
that hope was centimeters thick,
made of plexiglass love.
and we met in memories
swimming through deja vu
(and other profound notions)
dancing on a blue moon's prelude
One night never, you will wash
away this translucent disguise
and show me how the sun could shine,
make me believe in make believe,
be under love-stained sheets tomorrow,
I want to taste your salted flesh,
your canvas of smeared lipstick smiles,
before you disappear


.....

or

"Flappers"

Sweet young birdies break in their wings
Shed their long hair, bobs don't hide you
Drops of dark ink, staining reputations
If they light up and dance, nimble in step
Society chides at ravens in flight
Trumpets blare out undue accusations

Irreverently swinging into the night
Your sweetly uncolored face in contrast
To your scarlet lips, and to dark-shadowed eyes
Society's carriage calls for infants but you
Fill yours with bottles, liquor, and drink
A constantly-fueled dream never dies

A glint, a vivid aspect of life
To have known such a face in light of your time
A vaudevillian to them, but not in bad taste
Dancing ravens, bobbed and uncouth
You lasted too short, off-casted and poor
In wake of your time, sombered in waste
#2
Sure, take those scores and add them to the scores you get for this one...

....damn that Siftings is a hunk of man-panther
#6
While green is more inventive, some of the word choices are just blahh for want of no better word. And generally the whole piece suffers from unclosed sentences, awkward phrasing and contradicting imagery. Whereas blue is well organised aside from a couple of odd moments, and the diction is great. So Blue it is.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
#7
Inventive.....

Green is mostly Walt Whitman type style, only Green tried to write in blank verse and that messed him up. Green is going to buy a thesaurus.

Edit: btw if people vote again in this one, its probably best to forget about the other results...
#8
Quote by Siftings
Inventive.....

Green is mostly Walt Whitman type style, only Green tried to write in blank verse and that messed him up. Green is going to buy a thesaurus.

Edit: btw if people vote again in this one, its probably best to forget about the other results...


agreed sir.
#10
*flattered*

see this is a competition among gentlemen, with chivalry

Edit: Blue, cause this is chivalry
Last edited by Siftings at Feb 6, 2007,
#11
^ Its nice to see what with the recent spate of people voting for themselves.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
#13
I voted for Green, I like it better. Sorry Blue
According to BS statistics, 92% of teens have moved on to rap. If you're among the 8% who doesn't consider rap to be real music, donate your brains, as you clearly aren't using them.
#14
Uhh...

Well... I won't say what I think about them, but green is better.
#16
Quote by clichealias
Says the boy with the cannibal corpse icon. Aha.

Well, I love Cannibal Corpse, but they don't have meaningful lyrics.

I like other bands too, you know.
#17
You know what? I changed my mind. I like them both, they're pretty good... minus the part about Pac-Man.

Don't get me wrong, Pac-Man rules.
#18
Quote by Metal Massacre
You know what? I changed my mind. I like them both, they're pretty good... minus the part about Pac-Man.

Don't get me wrong, Pac-Man rules.

Then you should pick one and vote....because circle don't get the square 'less da man at da watch towa' ain't gotta rifle...

...I'm a-winnin'