#1
I've posted a couple of older versions on this site (all deleted now ) and got good response, and on SoundClick.com I got to #28 of around 14,000 ().
Here's my latest recording, new drumset, new guitar, new recording equipment.
Will c4c as always.
www.soundclick.com/thesandwichmassacre (please vote it up if you enjoyed it!)
www.myspace.com/ygokazuki (if you don't have a soundclick account)
www.freewebs.com/ygokazuki/index.html (if that didn't work)
EDIT: What do you guys think of me taking out the arpeggios in the beginning and replacing them with the riff in the second verse?
And I'll turn down the bass, and redo the guitars with a heavier tone yeah? lol
Thanks to all who listening, much appreciated, critting back asap.
Last edited by ygokazuki at Feb 6, 2007,
#2
Ok, the bass is too high in the mix and the guitar sounds far, far too trebley and thin, but the drums aren't too bad. It's got a good feel to it though, and it's good old fashioned pop-punk, which is always cool to hear! Why's it so short though?

Anyway, if you could listen to mine, that'd be cool. The link's here. It's pop-punk too
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#4
I dont like the guitar at start ... drums are nice ..
overall nice song . keep it up.