#2
It's not too bad, but you gotta work out that lead part during the choruses. It just sounds off.

Not bad though, keep practicing and it'll be perfect.
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#4
Critting while listening. I really like the intro effects and the intro itself. I have never heard this song before so I don't have anything to compare it to. Rhythm is perfect, right on the money. Are you using a backing track or did you use a machine? It sounds good. I think there is a little clipping on the second chorus, just before the bridge. Lots of clipping in the outro. You are a good guitar player. Much better than me. Like I said, I never heard the original, but since I listened to this, I am going to go find it on I-tunes.

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#5
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yeah I know, its a bitch to do properly!


Yeah, it's definately a weird lead piece.
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#6
reallly well done, great tone great playing. Synth parts were surprisingly well done. try adding vox now! (just make them better then the sh!t that anders calls vox) If you are going to do another in flames cover i recommend either december flower or graveland!!!!!
#7
anders......shit......
Ok I would agree to it somewhat! but he's better than a alot out their!!

and thanks man! I was hoping that all that stuffwould of been done but no.. lol
#8
Woah howd you get the synth? Sounds great. The drums as well. What do you use?

You forgot to put in the lead part with the synth in the beginning before the rhythm guitar comes in though

The rhythm guitar is amazing! Great tone. Now I know that toneport really works

Overall a great cover, though the lead parts need a little work. Good job!
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#9
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You forgot to put in the lead part with the synth in the beginning before the rhythm guitar comes in though


Yeah I know, I cant seem to get it right, some weird effect lol
#10
Lol yea I was wondering what kind of effect they use. SOunds cool though.
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