Your guitar sounds out of tune =/. But i guess it's a nice try there ^^. Also try pressing your frets harder when you play, and when performing a tremolo, shake the snare harder.
not a bad effort! Lead tone seems to be spot on!!! your rhythem tone could tighten up a bit!
solo was ok! tighten it up!! over-all good enough attemp!
Thanks False_God. And ImSheddingSkin, what do you mean? I don't understand what your trying to say. What about snares? I'm not playing the drums, it's got a drum track in the back.

Also, I have been playing for two years, I think I know how to press the frets and I'm pretty sure it was in tune

Thanks for the crits though
My Gear:

Schecter Hellraiser C-1 FR (EMG 85/81)
Mesa Boogie Stiletto Deuce
LOPO Custom 2x12 (Celestion V30s)
Last edited by tabber666 at Feb 6, 2007,
For the verses it sounded liked you listened for the bass to come in and then you would come in after that. Making yourself a little off. The Solo Needs a little polishing. Same thing. Lead tone was good. Rhythme sounded a little off. Other than that was pretty good.