#2
Your guitar sounds out of tune =/. But i guess it's a nice try there ^^. Also try pressing your frets harder when you play, and when performing a tremolo, shake the snare harder.
#3
not a bad effort! Lead tone seems to be spot on!!! your rhythem tone could tighten up a bit!
solo was ok! tighten it up!! over-all good enough attemp!
#4
Thanks False_God. And ImSheddingSkin, what do you mean? I don't understand what your trying to say. What about snares? I'm not playing the drums, it's got a drum track in the back.

Also, I have been playing for two years, I think I know how to press the frets and I'm pretty sure it was in tune

Thanks for the crits though
My Gear:

Schecter Hellraiser C-1 FR (EMG 85/81)
Mesa Boogie Stiletto Deuce
LOPO Custom 2x12 (Celestion V30s)
Last edited by tabber666 at Feb 6, 2007,
#5
For the verses it sounded liked you listened for the bass to come in and then you would come in after that. Making yourself a little off. The Solo Needs a little polishing. Same thing. Lead tone was good. Rhythme sounded a little off. Other than that was pretty good.