NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
#1
Well, I'm in a great mood for writing songs this week

I put a little more effort into this one, added more leads, harmonizing, etc. You'll see
Attachments:
MELODIC METAL.zip
Alta Vera - My real life alternative rock band.
Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

Super Mario, F-Zero & Dragonball Z covers!

PSN: whatev27

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kyucide
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2006
144 IQ
#2
I'd love to hear it actually played on guitar...
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jammin24
UG's axe sharpener
Join date: Jun 2006
327 IQ
#3
wow thats pretty sick! how did you make it and can you get me a tab cus i really fancy playing it.
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NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
#5
Thanks guys!

Yea, I plan on recording this very soon, probably this week. When I do I'll post the link here.
Alta Vera - My real life alternative rock band.
Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

Super Mario, F-Zero & Dragonball Z covers!

PSN: whatev27

Let me ask you, does a machine like yourself ever experience fear?

Snipy
Metalhead
Join date: Aug 2006
392 IQ
#6
Very nice, specially the acoustic bridges.
It will be great if you make a solo.
9/10
revan1013
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
512 IQ
#7
I don't think it needs a solo, it's excellent. It reminds me of video game music actually. Really good beat, always something going on, gives a great mood.

Great work. I would listen to this on my own easily. *two thumbs up*

Mine is experimental rock/metal, let me know what you think.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=520632
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Pieceofmind019
Krisiun Freak
Join date: Feb 2006
233 IQ
#8
Wow that was pretty damn good. The lead lines flowed with the rythem and everynote seemed to have a purpose rather than just showing off what you can do. The solo flowed perfectly and fit right in place.

cant really find anything that needs improving
RPotts
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Join date: Jan 2006
494 IQ
#9
What I like most about this is how many places it could go depending on the vocals. If you added in some Bruce Dickinson vocals it could be a ballady rock opera or something but you could also throw in the death metal singer and it could be this viscous melodic death metal song. A solo could fit in this song, but don't force one, it sounds good as it is. I like the very simple structure and lead lines but they still are a great harmony. Sounds good

8.5 - 9 or so
Yeah Dimebag is not the "Greatest Guitarist" of all time... Hendrix maybe... I must go get food to eat with my mouth

$250 for an amp? wow. is it worth it to invest that much in the amp?

ch715dallat
BTBAM=Godly
Join date: Jun 2006
3,466 IQ
#12
That was good but not as good as revolutions or pyreflies. The intro was good but the i didnt like the bends in it, it would be better without them. i liked the verse bit, the second set of riffs? sounded a bit iron maiden. The middle riffs were sweet as. On second thoughts it is as good ast the other 2 songs its just different i liked the acoustic in this more than the one in pyreflies as pyreflies one was to slow and you get bored at that bit easy, this was a bit faster paced, but your still an awesome writer man, hopefully il be able write some decent stuff soon once i get a bit more theory under my belt, ive been playin a year and i threw somethin together this week if you dont mind giving your verdict on it, i think its in my sig?
Last edited by ch715dallat at Feb 9, 2007,