Sum41Freek
The Canadian Firecrotch
Join date: May 2006
98 IQ
#1
After all the punk/alternative I've written, I decided to take a break and try my hand at metal. I don't really know a specific genre, but it doesn't really matter I suppose.
GP5 users should leave the drums on MIDI, I don't recommend the PowerTab because it sounds bad, use the MIDI instead (The powertab is only so ppls can see the tab.) And finally, C4C and all comments welcomed!
Attachments:
Metal Attempt.zip
Pieceofmind019
Krisiun Freak
Join date: Feb 2006
233 IQ
#2
the whole thing all together i think would sound better with vocals but as is it needs a lot of work. I like the riff called riff and the first part of verse. but the rest seemed rather uninspired and simplistic. it also wasnt really a song no solo or song structure.

Needs alot of work 5/10
6_6_6_1_syn
UG Newbie
Join date: Sep 2006
854 IQ
#3
were you listening to Avenged Sevenfold's Beast and the Harlot as you wrote this?
cool#9
next satriani
Join date: Feb 2006
309 IQ
#4
Meh. . . its ok. It just wasn't all that interesting and all the 16th note harmonized runs get old. Change it up, triplets, sixtuplets, irregular note values would give this some interest.