#1
Like a spider, a recluse...
Hungry and determined to feed.
Or like a mockingbird...
Sweet and peacefully calm.
Believe what you want,
Whatever your blind eyes will allow.

Embrace the lies...
And allow them to believer whatever they want to.
Embrace your desire to...
Embrace the lies,
And allow them to believe whatever they want.

I want to...
Embrace this holy shadow and sink within...
Succumb to the solace and give in.

But I cannot find peace...
No solace to hold...
So I'll embrace my shadow...
And fall into this crevice...
This hole...
Embrace the hatred...
Just to be like them...
Just to feel better...

I need to make myself believe...
That everything is alright...
Before this longing...
This craving...
This need and this want...
This desire...
Convinces me otherwise

Like a spider, a recluse...
Starving and determined to live...
Or like a mockingbird...
Free to fly and do whatever...
Believe what you want...
Whatever will make you feel better.

Kill what you need...
To live and too feed...
Before this need...
Becomes want...
Becomes desire...
To kill what you want...
And fulfill your hunger.
#2
Like a spider, a recluse...not sure wat a recluse is
Hungry and determined to feed.
Or like a mockingbird...
Sweet and peacefully calm.
Believe what you want,
Whatever your blind eyes will allow.

Embrace the lies...
And allow them to believer whatever they want to.cut out the 'to'
Embrace your desire to...
Embrace the lies,
And allow them to believe whatever they want.
eh, not bad, but the whole thing is basicly jsut repeating lines

I want to...
Embrace this holy shadow and sink within...
Succumb to the solace and give in.
not bad

But I cannot find peace...
No solace to hold...
So I'll embrace my shadow...
And fall into this crevice...
This hole...
Embrace the hatred...
Just to be like them...
Just to feel better...

I need to make myself believe...
That everything is alright...
Before this longing...
This craving...
This need and this want...
This desire...
Convinces me otherwise

Like a spider, a recluse...
Starving and determined to live...
Or like a mockingbird...
Free to fly and do whatever...
Believe what you want...
Whatever will make you feel better.

Kill what you need...
To live and too feed...
Before this need...
Becomes want...
Becomes desire...
To kill what you want...
And fulfill your hunger.

nothing really wrong with it, except it seemed u repeated lines a bit to much for my tastes. its decent.7/10

crit one of my newst if u could