#1
I'd like to hear your thoughts on this one...


I saw a chimpanzee in a bonzai tree
I took a rowboat up a creek
With a singing dancing panda bear
That I stole from a circus freak

It was a stormy night in Mexico
When the panda said to me
Ill take you to a mystic land
If youll kindly set me free

So I turned the key and he said to me
You’ve saved my life today
So kick on back and take a nap
Ill row the night away

CHORUS:
You gotta hope, you gotta fight
Gotta make your dreams come true
Gotta feel good, real good, make it work
The choice is up to you
Don’t worry, don’t break a sweat
Don’t waste the time of day
Its easy just don’t forget
The weeping willow way

So why be down when you can be up?
It all looks so much better on top
Of the willow tree

It took six long days and half a night
Till the destination came
I saw a lonely weeping willow tree
He said willy was his name

He said pirates came and plundered
All the willows that once stood
With diamonds, jewels, and golden leaves
Encrusted in their wood


So the panda said, “I have a plan,
to save our troubled friend.
We'll move his roots to Babylon
Where the willows never end."

CHORUS

So why be down when you can be up?
It all looks so much better on top...

Of Willy the Weeping Willow
Most magnificent tree of all
Willy the Weeping Willow
Spreed your roots, and grow so tall.
#2
verrry strange and weird, but original.i think its not bad. also very Beck sounding.
#3
I saw a chimpanzee in a bonzai tree
I took a rowboat up a creek
With a singing dancing panda bear
That I stole from a circus freak

It was a stormy night in Mexico
When the panda said to me
Ill take you to a mystic land
If youll kindly set me free

So I turned the key and he said to me
You’ve saved my life today
So kick on back and take a nap
Ill row the night away

CHORUS:
You gotta hope, you gotta fight
Gotta make your dreams come true
Gotta feel good, real good, make it work
The choice is up to you
Don’t worry, don’t break a sweat
Don’t waste the time of day
Its easy just don’t forget
The weeping willow way
i dont like the whole chorus

So why be down when you can be up?
It all looks so much better on top
Of the willow tree

It took six long days and half a night
Till the destination came
I saw a lonely weeping willow tree
He said willy was his name

He said pirates came and plundered
All the willows that once stood
With diamonds, jewels, and golden leaves
Encrusted in their wood


So the panda said, “I have a plan,
to save our troubled friend.
We'll move his roots to Babylon
Where the willows never end."

CHORUS

So why be down when you can be up?
It all looks so much better on top...

Of Willy the Weeping Willow
Most magnificent tree of all
Willy the Weeping Willow
Spreed your roots, and grow so tall.


pretty good, i like the goofy story, but i dont like the chorus at all, it doesnt fit the light, easy, funny flow of the rest.

crit one of my newest if u could