#1
crit 4 crit


Intro:
This is for those nights you just want to sit at home
all alone, and think about everything.
Your all confused, you've gotta choose
What's best for you.

Chorus:
I've spent four years waiting for this
I've spent a million times trying to fix
It, now I've finally got you
Exactly where I want you, girl...

Verse 1:
I swear that this is everything
That I've ever wanted
It's the only thing I pictured being right.
But then why do I seem to
fail at my every attempt to
keep this bridge from going up in flames
Oh, at least we'll go down in style.

Chorus:
I've spent four years waiting for this
I've spent a million times trying to fix
It, now I've finally got you
Exactly where I want you
And it, is all wrong.

Verse 2:
Now here you sit, begging me to do
Anything that I could possibly imagine to you
This is all that I've wanted
Yet somehow your falling apart, we're breaking at the seams
Your arms aren't the comfort that they used to be.

Bridge:
Voices swirling in my head
Images flash before my eyes
I see the teares stream down your face
These thoughts race through my mind
This love I've had for so long
Now suddenly feels, it feels so hollow.

Chorus:
I've spent four years waiting for this
I've spent a million times trying to fix
It, now I've finally got you
Exactly where I want you
And before you know it
I am gone...
#4
Read The FAQ And Rules. Your not allowed to bump your thread, you have to let others bump it for you.
#5
this is rather intriging... i dont have much to say about this but i really do love it... the chours change at the end is skillful. This is one of them songs that radios play over and over and over and over until enevtually they get bumped off the charts... edit this and you'll have a masterpiece.. dont get me wrong but try to revise and use some different words.. The use of other/ less used words will catch the ear of the listener and make it interesting... making them want to hear it again. other wise great!! crit for crit
#6
see this is the kind of song i usually don't crit because there isn't any thing to change!!! and i hate that cause i need something to complain about in a song. but keep up the good work, cause if you dont ull here about it in long replies that do nothing to help

kinda like this 1!