#1
My dick's all flaccid
i took too much acid
think you should could call dad
cause now i'm chasin lassie
where's my ****in gun? Yo' this knoll be grassy
i just murdered that fag from the show degrassi
you gonna pass me? Without even asking?
grab both my balls and my dick; time for multitasking
Last edited by mydadisjewish at Feb 7, 2007,
#5
My dick's all flaccid
i took too much acid
(I really love the phrasing here. Awesome.)
think you should could call dad
cause now i'm chasin lassie
Great metaphor!
where's my ****in gun? Yo' this knoll be grassy
i just murdered that fag from the show degrassi
The meter doesn't really line up here. I'm not sure if this is intentional.)
you gonna pass me? Without even asking?
grab both my balls and my dick; time for multitasking
Amazing.

Basically, this is the best poem ever. I will fight anyone who disagrees with me, and I will win.
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#6
Quote by mydadisjewish
My dick's all flaccid
i took too much acid
think you should could call dad
cause now i'm chasin lassie
where's my ****in gun? Yo' this girl be nasty.
i just murdered that fag from the show degrassi
you gonna pass me? Without even asking?
grab both my balls and my dick; time for multitasking



I changed one line. whatcha'll boyz tink know foolz?
#7
hmmm???
Strange but well writen.
Nice flow.... and some most of the phrasing was cool.
Promises meant a lot back then.