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Green
3 38%
Red
5 63%
Voters: 8.
#1
2 points up for grabs here folks, vote away


"You're the most important thing in my life"

I could live off those kind of lines
when she says them with full sincerity,
I feel like I don't even have to breathe,
like the words themselves could keep me living.


"The only way I could stop is if I promise you I will"

Lines that make me feel some sort of importance,
I feel the absence of loneliness,
something that I haven't felt in a long time,
I feel like I'm sublime, at least through her eyes.


"I miss you so much, I just want to see you"

Words that weigh me down with regret,
but that's better then the words being unsaid,
because at least now I know how she feels.



Snowdeafened.
A vacuum, with no sound, no thought
no ideas. Nothing.
A foregone exploration,
predicted by glassed corneas.
Snowblinded.
An unforgiving journey into the
unknown, the unheard, the unseen.
It's understandable.

A daunting self-address,
a foray into the forces
of consciousness.

And like the birth of time,
a tick gets me underway.
At least I'm heading
in the right direction.
#3
Thanks for meeting the requirments I asked for, but since you challenged me I wrote a different piece, my bad
#8
Red seemed to stutter along, without any cohesion. So Green.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.