scorpion618^
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2005
477 IQ
#1
Here's another song I made for my band, but I don't know if we'll use it.
Tell me what you think and what I should change if anything.
Attachments:
0358.zip
Pieceofmind019
Krisiun Freak
Join date: Feb 2006
233 IQ
#3
well it started out really promising. the intro and verse were both really good, but the chourus was just eh for me. I didnt get the pause at the bridge it might be a vocal part or something but as is is was just kinda a break that lasted to long. The clean part was a good contrast to the song but it needs to be longer. three clean chords just sounded strange. By the time the secong clean part came around i was geting kind of board, if you added a solo i think it would break the repetitiveness up. And i liked the harmony at the ending it was cool

Over all it was good but needes a lot of work 6/10
ch715dallat
BTBAM=Godly
Join date: Jun 2006
3,466 IQ
#5
i loved the main riff it was exactly what i find interesting, some of the later riffs and stuff wasnt as good if you maybe added a solo that would be a sweet ass song, but i would cut out the clean chorus bit IMO