Just want to know what you all think of my tone... I'm not too sure about it.

Also, the 2 riffs in there are from my newest song... whatta ya think of that I'd like to know as well

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I think it sounds cool, but I don't think you should rely on the people here to tell you what your tone should be. You should find something you think is awesome, and use it.

The riffs sounded pretty nice too, though moving into the second one sounded a tad sloppy.

As long as the lyrics don't sound like "RAWR RAWR RAWR! I'M A DINOSAUR!" then you should be good.
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