#1
okay. so. this one started out as something
not that weird, but then i added keyboard
and i changed up the basslines that i had,
and it turned into something kind of jazzy.
it ended up being pretty weird in the end.
SO. listen. make sure you hear the bass,
because it sounds like crap without it.
and maybe it sounds like crap with it.
i don't know. tell me what you think.

PS: i don't play bass or keyboards, so
i don't know how playable it is on them.
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weirdy jazzy thing.zip

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#2
I love it! It was quite interesting and surprising at times. I didn't really like the outro so much, it kinda ended the song abruptly. I think the outro could be effective as an interlude instead.
#3
I really liked it! It's indeed weird but that's cool! Maybe add a little solo or something (not necessarily on guitar, keyboard solos are neat as well!).

Keep it up!

grtz
#4
Yay Grovermans! Missed ya, bud.

I liked everything overall.
There were several sour sounding notes here and there.
The keyboard worked really well with the guitar. Very well written.
The bass fits just as well, though it doesn't stand out as much as the keys.
I loved the outro. That was a great turnaround.

Aside from the sour notes in places, it sounds great.
Nice work.
And uh. Don't leave us too soon, alright?
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#6
Quote by HumanitysDeath
Yay Grovermans! Missed ya, bud.

I liked everything overall.
There were several sour sounding notes here and there.
The keyboard worked really well with the guitar. Very well written.
The bass fits just as well, though it doesn't stand out as much as the keys.
I loved the outro. That was a great turnaround.

Aside from the sour notes in places, it sounds great.
Nice work.
And uh. Don't leave us too soon, alright?
haha i've been posting off and on for a while.

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#8
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haha i've been posting off and on for a while.

Yea, and last time you posted a song, I was banned.
I was so sad.
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#10
Another one from Grovermans...I would say i like this one, it made me fell like dancing a little. The keys were good and i agree that the bass makes the song what it is. Very good job to see somethin different yet still good. Give mine a listen if you get a chance...its called frozen oblivion and is in my sig
#13
fantastic all around, major mars volta vibe tho with the keys and the chord choices. and it may have been a little too repetitive
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#14
haha yeah i was wondering if anyone
would see the mars volta influence.

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#15
ehh...well not "harmonizing" but harmonies...the song may not be intended to have any harmonized parts, but i always favor a little bit of harmony at least, im just one of those guys who freaks out if they hear two notes clash...dont get me wrong, it has lot of potential.

...i wouldnt wioryy too much about it, it could just be me