Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
2,846 IQ
#1
okay. so. this one started out as something
not that weird, but then i added keyboard
and i changed up the basslines that i had,
and it turned into something kind of jazzy.
it ended up being pretty weird in the end.
SO. listen. make sure you hear the bass,
because it sounds like crap without it.
and maybe it sounds like crap with it.
i don't know. tell me what you think.

PS: i don't play bass or keyboards, so
i don't know how playable it is on them.
Attachments:
weirdy jazzy thing.zip

I just want to sleep forever.


Led_Zeppelin_37
UG Newbie
Join date: Dec 2004
55 IQ
#2
I love it! It was quite interesting and surprising at times. I didn't really like the outro so much, it kinda ended the song abruptly. I think the outro could be effective as an interlude instead.
saddam
Carcass
Join date: Apr 2003
1,808 IQ
#3
I really liked it! It's indeed weird but that's cool! Maybe add a little solo or something (not necessarily on guitar, keyboard solos are neat as well!).

Keep it up!

grtz
HumanitysDeath
UG Board King
Join date: Jun 2004
264 IQ
#4
Yay Grovermans! Missed ya, bud.

I liked everything overall.
There were several sour sounding notes here and there.
The keyboard worked really well with the guitar. Very well written.
The bass fits just as well, though it doesn't stand out as much as the keys.
I loved the outro. That was a great turnaround.

Aside from the sour notes in places, it sounds great.
Nice work.
And uh. Don't leave us too soon, alright?
Spiral Out
Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
2,846 IQ
#6
Quote by HumanitysDeath
Yay Grovermans! Missed ya, bud.

I liked everything overall.
There were several sour sounding notes here and there.
The keyboard worked really well with the guitar. Very well written.
The bass fits just as well, though it doesn't stand out as much as the keys.
I loved the outro. That was a great turnaround.

Aside from the sour notes in places, it sounds great.
Nice work.
And uh. Don't leave us too soon, alright?
haha i've been posting off and on for a while.

I just want to sleep forever.


HumanitysDeath
UG Board King
Join date: Jun 2004
264 IQ
#8
Quote by Grovermans
haha i've been posting off and on for a while.

Yea, and last time you posted a song, I was banned.
I was so sad.
Spiral Out
DarkSonata
Registered User
Join date: May 2005
1,161 IQ
#10
Another one from Grovermans...I would say i like this one, it made me fell like dancing a little. The keys were good and i agree that the bass makes the song what it is. Very good job to see somethin different yet still good. Give mine a listen if you get a chance...its called frozen oblivion and is in my sig
Spark1284
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2004
244 IQ
#13
fantastic all around, major mars volta vibe tho with the keys and the chord choices. and it may have been a little too repetitive
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Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
2,846 IQ
#14
haha yeah i was wondering if anyone
would see the mars volta influence.

I just want to sleep forever.


6_6_6_1_syn
UG Newbie
Join date: Sep 2006
854 IQ
#15
ehh...well not "harmonizing" but harmonies...the song may not be intended to have any harmonized parts, but i always favor a little bit of harmony at least, im just one of those guys who freaks out if they hear two notes clash...dont get me wrong, it has lot of potential.

...i wouldnt wioryy too much about it, it could just be me