#1
its called blue december and if u goin to crit it , go to the link in my sig and crit it on that forum
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#2
Pretty nice dude, you're showing improvement! It would be great if you could have some drums come in shortly after you finish/start the arpegiated(spelling?) part of the song in the beginning, but that's really my only suggestion; Like I said you're showing improvement man, keep it up!