#3
The chords at bar 12 sounded very rushed. Bar 26 seemed a bit filler to me. I agree with the post above, it looks like you've just made up a bunch or riffs and chucked them all together. Im all for experimental/progressive stuff, but it just doesnt work if you have no structure at all. I also dont think the acoustic guitar goes well with the distortion guitar.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=518359