Heascase
Banned
Join date: May 2005
570 IQ
#2
Doesn't really seem to have much structure. The riffs by them selfs are good, but I cant really pick out a chorus or verse or anything, ya' know? It's a good start but you need to structure it a little more (unless its going to be an instrumental, then it would be cool).

Not bad, but it needs a bit of work.

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killsweng
Stay Metal \m/
Join date: Jul 2006
76 IQ
#3
The chords at bar 12 sounded very rushed. Bar 26 seemed a bit filler to me. I agree with the post above, it looks like you've just made up a bunch or riffs and chucked them all together. Im all for experimental/progressive stuff, but it just doesnt work if you have no structure at all. I also dont think the acoustic guitar goes well with the distortion guitar.

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