#1
(Verse 1)
Don’t Tell Me What To Do
Anyways, Who Are You?
Some Lame Ass Loser Band
Whose Career Is Buried 6 Feet Under Sand

(Verse2)
You Couldn’t Play To Save Your Life
Wish Someone Would End It With Ax Or Knife
Ill Take My Pitchfork, Take My Torch
Spilling Blood Without Remorse

(Chorus)
Beat It, Beat It Out.
Were Gonna Beat It, Beat It Out.
Beat It, Beat It Out
Were Gonna Win This, Kill ‘em Out
Beat It, Beat It Out
Were Gonna Beat It, Beat It Out

(Verse 3)
He stuck my head in fire, told me I'd see Hell,
Watch us burn our bones.
We wont forgive, we wont forget we wont be taken
as a stepping stone!

(Verse 4)
That’s Not Only Thing I’ll Use To Beat You
Anything, You Know Its True
Guitar, Bass, Drums, Vocals Too
Because Were Better Then Your Crew

(Chorus)
Beat It, Beat It Out.
Were Gonna Beat It, Beat It Out.
Beat It, Beat It Out
Were Gonna Win This, Kill ‘em Out
Beat It, Beat It Out
Were Gonna Beat It, Beat It Out

(Guitar Solo)

(Fade Out)
(Chorus)
Beat It, Beat It Out.
Were Gonna Beat It, Beat It Out.
Beat It, Beat It Out
Were Gonna Win This, Kill ‘em Out
Beat It, Beat It Out
Were Gonna Beat It, Beat It Out


WITHOUT YOU


Without You, Theres No Taste In Life
Without You, It Cuts Me Like A Knife

You Promised You'd Send A Letter
I'd Hate To Call You A Liar
Dont Take These Words For Granted,
Listen To What I Say
I'm Nothing Without You

Without You
Without You
Without You
Without You

Some Scars Can Be Healed
But When I See You, It Cuts Me Like A Knife
And Now I'm Scarred For Life
Even Though I Didnt Mean That Much To You
Consider This A Little Thing I Do
Like A Letter, From Me To You..

Without You
Without You
Without You
Without You

You can tell alot of people by the shoe's that they wear,
What they have done, how they have done it,
If they have been everywhere...
And if you have dertied them a little you have to clean them Anyways
and try to forget the times of good and heartfull yesterdays

Without You (Repeat)
#4
some advice i got from one of my songs....


NEVER use the word LAME in a song.

don't ask me why, but apparently you're not allowed to do it
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#5
Hey, this is a dumb question, and I know it, but how do you get the "signature" at the bottom of everything you type
#6
I'm sorry but that was perhaps the most childish piece of writing i've ever read, first off a verse is about as long as two of yours, there are TWO verses in your first song that are broken up into four STANZAS you sound like your ten years old "Because we are better than your crew" Honestly what the hell are you some rap band and the use of "Guitar bass drums, and vocals too"? You are honestly not s***ing me right now that sounds like you pulled it from some over played pop metal song from the 80s written by a Ten year old which you apparently seem to be and as for With Out You, you honestly couldn't have come up with something more original im sure that right now if i searched "lyrics, with out you"in google i would get... exactly 7,760,000 results and that is the exact figure oh an just on a quick side note who the f*** WRITES in that their is going to be a solo the only time i've ever heard of that is in the Spinal Tap movie, on a final note i would say you got the right stuff kid you got the right heart and some good subject matter, you just need to definitally improve upon your writing technique and experience and some day you'll get really good i can tell, just work harder and STOP using so many god damn cliches
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Last edited by The Bad Larry at Feb 8, 2007,
#7
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I'm sorry but that [bunch of other stuff] damn cliches


You don't beat around the bush, do you?

TS, as said before, just be careful what you post in future and make sure it's by the rules.
#9
What is this thread?

I can't even get into how many rule-breakers are going on here...
#10
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You don't beat around the bush, do you?

TS, as said before, just be careful what you post in future and make sure it's by the rules.


right after i said that i asked myself why? and then i realized its because a couple of years ago i would do the exact same things with the same cliches thats why i changed up the ending there i felt really bad but hey its the truth
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