#1
Here is an acoustic track i wrote yesterday.
All srit is welcome
Peace.

Sing for a penny...
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Intro.......................>>>>>>>>
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Sing for a penny for a night out in the town.........
What ever it takes to turn that frown upside down.
Im just sitting here with all of my freinds.....
This is how it starts and i hope its how it ends.
We can have a laugh and a little joke around.........
But in the morning you will probally be coming down oh coming down.

Oh i dont care what it is i have to try, as long as i smile and get my high........
Im alright, im alright oh im alright.

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Instrumental.......................>>>>>>>>
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Days pass by and time takes its toll........
I stay young while my freinds are getting old.
The weather is sunny and im going to set sail........
Got to get my self back on my rail.
Got the car and the house but it dont matter though....
As im now sitting, sitting on my own.

Oh i dont care what it is i have to try, as long as i smile and get my high........
Im alright, im alright oh im alright.

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Outro.......................>>>>>>>>
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#2
"This is how it starts and i hope its how it ends."
i would change it to this
"this is how it starts and hopfully how it ends"

"We can have a laugh and a little joke around"
i would change to this
"we can have a laugh and just joke around"


thats really my only problems with it. i like the first verse alot more than the second verse for some reason.
crit any of mine if u could
#3
I like it. the lyrics seem to have sort of a jack johnson feel to them. nice


Flying is simple, you just throw yourself at he ground and miss.

This world needs more Dallas Friday's!