#1
Intro

Verse 1

Rock today
Aint got no say
In what im livin for

This tune thats come
Gotta load my gun
Time to start a war

Dont think i know
When its time to go
Cause you cant shut me out

Nows the time
For us to rise
Let the six string scream and shout


Chorus

Oh
Yea
Free to rock n roll

Oh
Yea
Were free to rock n roll
ShakeRag hits the stage March 15, 2007 at Westview High School
#3
Didnt really like your loading gun line..

There was one line i liked;
"Let the six string scream and shout"

But without music its hard to tell wether it would make a good catchy song or not
crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522183
Quote by MarchOfEternity
Oh, and azza, you're a pretty good writer! Graybass is a god amongst men and you're turning real quick to be his new messiah lol.

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You're doing good, mate.

Keep up the good work.

I'll take A for $500, Alex.
#4
man this song is so awesome...do you have a band that plays this song? this is the exact message i am looking for....gosh do you know what would be awesome....no bass player...3 lead guitarists...and a drummer....man that'd be some band...if you need another guitarist to send this AWESOME message to the world...let me know...id love to be in that band...and a suggestion for the name of that band...SHAKERAG....kinda catchy huh?...awesome man..awesome....oh yeah..3 guitar solos in it would be awesome too..one for each of the guitarists...lol
The blues had a child...it was called rock and roll
#5
the best part of the song is the music believe me and it is made to sound like a classic rock song...thats all my band plays...thanks for the crit...
ShakeRag hits the stage March 15, 2007 at Westview High School