Sweet and simple, with a catchy tune it could be really good. Unfortunately I don't have the capability to listen to the song at your link on this computer.

Is there any more is it that just repeated?
I dunno, the vocals seem abit out of place. Like an eerie kind, if you get me.

The lyrics are fine and I quite like to "tonight" bit, but it seem's too deep on parts.
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