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i would consider it pretty good but thats why i wanna know what you guys think

i tried layering it and it came out pretty bad

comments are appriciated!!
well WRITTEN, not performed.
To be honest, after you had that pedal point riff thing it got super sloppy.

I would suggest practicing it slow and then speeding up until you have it down clean.
Nice riff though. Kind of post hardcore-ish
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What did you use for recording? I want to record some of my stuff but I don't really know how