#1
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i would consider it pretty good but thats why i wanna know what you guys think


i tried layering it and it came out pretty bad

comments are appriciated!!
#2
well WRITTEN, not performed.
To be honest, after you had that pedal point riff thing it got super sloppy.

I would suggest practicing it slow and then speeding up until you have it down clean.
Nice riff though. Kind of post hardcore-ish
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#3
What did you use for recording? I want to record some of my stuff but I don't really know how