guitar?
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Join date: Apr 2006
870 IQ
#1

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|-----3---------3-5-------3-------------3-3-5-5----|
|-5-5---5-3-5-5-----3-5-5---5-3-3-5-5-0------------|
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or is this better?

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|-----3-------5-3-----3------------|
|-3-5---5-3-5-----3-5---5-3-3-5----|
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Last edited by guitar? at Feb 10, 2007,
Haha, Crackhead
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Join date: Nov 2006
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#2
The riff doesn't really seem to have an endpoint. It seems like there should be more.

EDIT - If you add an open note on the D string at the end, it sounds better, IMO. Btw, it's good.
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Last edited by Haha, Crackhead at Feb 10, 2007,