#1
It's not the most original and its not where i want it to be but i figured i'd get some crit for now. as always, C4C. thanks.

[Verse 1]
While your rents are away
We sure as hell will play
Games we never thought we would before
We went out for some food
Then came back to my room
Who knew what that night would have in store

[Verse 2]
With my arms on your back
We lied down for a nap
But i don't think we slept that whole night
Just the sound of your voice
And knowing I'm your choice
Could wash away, my fear and fright

[Chorus]
Don't say a word
I know you feel the same
Just know you mean so much
You're everything, everything
(x2)
To me

[Verse 3]
I love to hear you say
You're both alright and okay
I always seem to smile when you do
You wouldn't dance with me
In front of my T.V.
But i'll save that special thought, for you

[Verse 4]
And as the night goes on
I'm dreading thoughts of dawn
I don't ever wanna see her leave
I smile when I see her
Standing in the mirror
After all these years, I can't believe

[Chorus]

[Music Break]

After all these years
I can't believe she's still here
I can't believe she stayed with me for so long
She's always been right
In every one of our fights
She stayed with me even though I was wrong

[Chorus]
Don't say a word
I know you feel the same
Just know you mean so much
You're everything, everything
(x2)

You're everything, everything
You're everything, everything
To me