Stay Metal \m/
Join date: Jul 2006
76 IQ
Ive had this song lying around for a while, added drums to it the other day and i think it sounds pretty nice. I was listening to a bit of Swallow The Sun when i made it, dunno if it shines through though. The second half is where most of the melody comes out.

Let us know what you think. C4C etc. Cheers.
Proud Autodidact
Join date: Apr 2006
1,692 IQ
Amazing work, dude! The drums blend perfectly with the guitars!
You simply MUST check out my music on
Reverbnation Downloads available here
Myspace Streaming Only

Especially for fans of Tool, APC, Avant-Garde, Ambient music, rock instrumentals, and fans of music in general. Will not disappoint.
Hmm, Interesting
Join date: Nov 2006
32 IQ
I didn't like the melody, personally, i found it quite clashing.
Lets do this I'm a cashew
Join date: Sep 2003
1,716 IQ
First off, thanks for critting my piece!

As for yours, I think it's medium. The lead and rhythm guitar chords at the start don't really clash, but they don't really sound good. Most of the riffs are repeated too many times for me as well. If I were you, I'd go over this with a fine tooth comb. Try and combine the lead and rhythm that you have now into one guitar for chords then write some new leads over them. I did like the section around 40 alot with the harmonizing guitars because that was new and interesting and not repetitive, and I feel like if you sat down and tried to write some better leads you could, as evidenced by the 40ish section.

All in all, not bad, but not really that great. 7/10
Washburn WI66 Pro E Celtic Cross (1 of 48!)
Washburn WI66 Pro Honeyburst
Takamine EG334SC Acoustic-Electric
Peavey XXX 120W All Tube Half Stack
Line6 MM4/FM4/DL4
Boss NS2
Vox Snakecharmer Compressor
Digitech XP100 Whammy Wah