#1
Right... im tryin to come up with riffs that i can use. If come up with a part of a riff, but i cant finish the ****ing thing off! can any of you bass players out there help me? its a metal riff btw, so if u don't do metal, **** off!

Heres the bit ive got:

G|-------------------------------------------------
D|-------------------------------------------------
A|-------------------------------------------------
E|-7-----------------------------------------5-7-
B|---0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0--------

G|-------------------------------------------------
D|-------------------------------------------------
A|-------------------------------------------------
E|------------------------------------------10-7-
B|-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0----------

G|---------------------------------------------
D|---------------------------------------------
A|---------------------------------------------
E|---------------------------------------------
B|-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-8-8-8-8-10-10-10-10

G|-------------------------------------------------
D|-------------------------------------------------
A|-------------------------------------------------
E|-7-----------------------------------------5-7-
B|---0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0--------

G|-----------------------------------------------
D|-----------------------------------------------
A|-----------------------------------------------
E|----------------------------------------10-7-
B|-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0--------

G|-------------------
D|------------------- I need a really awesome bit for the end of the riff
A|------------------- Something along the style of Lamb Of God or In Flames
E|-------------------
B|-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-

Any help would really be appreciated!

#2
Seems too simple to me. Good start I guess.

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#3
ummm mebbe tune your E down to a D for starters. lamb of god....hmmm. mebbe whip out a wicked shadows fall solo?? ever heard of them? anyways....yeah check out shadows fall he has good bass solo's. if you need to, just keep thunping the same line you've been using so far eh? see if that works good luck, hope this helps
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#4
G|-----------------------------------------------
D|-----------------------------------------------
A|-----------------------------------------------
E|--7-10--6-9-------6-5-2-------------------
B|--------0----0-5-8--------1-----------------
#5
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G|-----------------------------------------------
D|-----------------------------------------------
A|-----------------------------------------------
E|--7-10--6-9-------6-5-2-------------------
B|--------0----0-5-8--------1-----------------


+1 that fits in really well, but perhaps it's a little bit to death metally, still a sweet run though.
#6
A fill is a fill isnt it?

Why dont you have a quarter half note B and then a half note pause.

Then cut back into it.