another metalcore song I made
there's one riff in there thats kind of boring and it goes on for a LONG time and i apologize
cause i know it gets boring
but the rest of the song is better
and this has the first 7/8 riff Ive ever made, and i think it sounds cool
any comments are cool
lol u mean riff 4 that is long, yes it was a lil long, but still i liked it, i cant really give u any pointers cuz im really not good at metalling...

but just thot i'd say it was cool, keep it up

EDIT: And i really liked rif 16, and the solo...
Last edited by Jonjy2 at Feb 11, 2007,