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Good job, one day I hope to make my own songs and show them to people, but I have to play more guitar first!
maybe its not my style but that was pretty boring. couldn't get through much
Not too bad. You have some good ideas there, but like on "Absence" ... the lead part was good though a little more space would have gone a long way. It seemed undefined I guess, to be honest. Good ideas though, just refine them a little more, those are my thoughts on it.