#2
Good job, one day I hope to make my own songs and show them to people, but I have to play more guitar first!
#4
Not too bad. You have some good ideas there, but like on "Absence" ... the lead part was good though a little more space would have gone a long way. It seemed undefined I guess, to be honest. Good ideas though, just refine them a little more, those are my thoughts on it.