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So I have taken a break from covers for a short while and started writing another Original.I am starting to use Keyboards a lot more in my music and I think the song alone shows that.I'm not quite sure what genre that it is but don't be expecting any death metal.I am noticing that my style is shifting to a lighter side and is far less aggressive than it use to be.I'm not quite sure where I am going to go with the song but I keep invisioning a heavy brigde part and then possibly a variation of an earlier riff for the finally.Tell me what you think of it so far.

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By the way.The name of the song is not really what it will be when I am done with it.


The Song
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#2
very cool i dont think u have to do anymore with it maybe some vocals but still good keep it up


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