#1
thanks ahead of time. Critique for critique

V1:
My soul longs for You
it needs the living God
how long until i can
see Your face?
I've cried for You
while we sinners ask
"Where is this God?"

V2
Why do they throw You down?
and why do i quiet You in me?
I need Your help God
because i want to praise you
i want You, my rock
to be shown in me
once again

Chorus
You are my God
and i wish to praise You
You are my God
and i wish this melody
to praise You

V3
Send out Your light, Lord
Send out Your truth
let them lead me again
bring me back to You
Lord, take this life of sin
turn it into something more,
let me be Yours

Chorus
You are my God
and i wish to praise you
You are my God
and i wish this melody
to praise you
Last edited by Cyclones41 at Feb 13, 2007,
#2
typical christian song except for the first stanza,

While the sinners ask
"where is your god?"

umm, your a sinner to! that just confused me. does that mean you also are asking where your god is?