#1
This is my 1st eva song, verses r supposed 2 b sung slow with a faster chorus. pls comment n crit

You act like you’re in a world of pain
But the truth seems to me to be so plain
And I’m way too tired to play your game
You might have a cloud but there’s still no rain
And this is always gonna be the same

Smile sugar your life’s okay
Look up lover, make my day
Smirk sweetheart I’ve got something to say
Laugh lady, don’t be this way

Your tears are the tears of a crocodile
I never thought someone could be so vain
And it’s been this way for quite a while
And this is always gonna be the same
So come on and please give me a smile

Smile sugar your life’s okay
Look up lover, make my day
Smirk sweetheart I’ve got something to say
Laugh lady, don’t be this way
Stop this sad story screenplay

Smile sugar your life’s okay
Look up lover, make my day
Smirk sweetheart I’ve got something to say
Laugh lady, don’t be this way
Stop this sad story screenplay

Don’t put your sorrows on me
I can’t handle your misery
Don’t put your sorrows on me
I can’t handle your misery
Don’t put your sorrows on me
I can’t handle your misery
Don’t put your sorrows on me
I can’t handle
I can’t handle
I can’t handle your misery
#2
you cant have every line ryme with the last it dosnt sound good...other thatn that its fine